Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: dro man jerr on August 07, 2008, 10:54:24 pm

Title: Groadytoad
Post by: dro man jerr on August 07, 2008, 10:54:24 pm
what do you think
anything that i can improve on?(http://www.pixeljoint.com/files/icons/full/robo.png)
Title: Groadytoad
Post by: dro man jerr on August 08, 2008, 01:38:16 am
my first attempt at using groady shadinnggg
(http://img112.imageshack.us/img112/3571/froggy8.png)
Title: Re: Groadytoad
Post by: dro man jerr on August 08, 2008, 02:17:31 am
(http://img383.imageshack.us/img383/7738/sddgvc2.png)
and heres a flower thingy
cc please
do you like it?
what can i fix
Title: Re: domo arigato mr. roboto
Post by: AdamAtomic on August 08, 2008, 05:11:49 am
anything that i can improve on?

Short Answer: Yes.

Long Answer: Pretty much everything!  Just like the rest of us :)  A trip to the tutorials thread in the General forum is always a good place to start.

However, I have to know: what is this?  What have you drawn?  What is in the background?  What on earth does this image represent?  Not like, thematically, but literally, what is it?
Title: Re: Groadytoad
Post by: dro man jerr on August 08, 2008, 05:38:41 am
its an eyeflower
and the first one is a robot
and this one is a frog(http://img520.imageshack.us/img520/5508/frogpr2.png)