Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: abra71 on July 17, 2008, 08:05:40 pm

Title: rpg character (walking animation)
Post by: abra71 on July 17, 2008, 08:05:40 pm

hi
i started a rpg character
here it is:
(http://img292.imageshack.us/img292/6876/foldfinishedel2.png)
it's still a wip tell me how to improve

+ tileset
(http://img360.imageshack.us/img360/5893/tileset002xw6.png)
tyvm
abra71

Title: Re: rpg character
Post by: michael on July 18, 2008, 12:26:42 am

so from the front, youre giving us the impression that this guy has a slightly pointy face, slightly reptilian or something. but the sideview shows him with a round face and no snout at all. as a result the sideview frame with both eyes showing is very wonky. a consistent head shape will help a lot

Title: Re: rpg character
Post by: abra71 on July 20, 2008, 04:42:57 pm

(http://img360.imageshack.us/img360/5153/foldanimatievoorgs6.gif)
(http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/1447/foldanimatieachterde7.gif)

i don't like the animations yet
but i don't know how to improve
anyone?

Title: Re: rpg character (walking animation)
Post by: CaKsTeR on July 20, 2008, 05:34:54 pm

I think it's too static, his head should be bobbing a bit. Good start to it though.

Title: Re: rpg character (walking animation)
Post by: abra71 on July 20, 2008, 07:03:37 pm

and here is a first tile set
(http://img360.imageshack.us/img360/5893/tileset002xw6.png)