Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: David on June 14, 2008, 05:43:02 am
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(http://www.iamnotoriginal.com/images/pixel/vinnie_04.png)
I was inspired by Skurwy (http://www.wayofthepixel.net/pixelation/index.php?topic=6327.0) and Fallout's rad concept art (http://images.wikia.com/fallout/images//d/de/Fallout1.jpg).
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David, you know exactly what we're going to say when you ask for critique, or post this and most of your art in the critique section: clean up the jaggies and fight for completion! I know it's a style thing, but it feels like it's kinda' gone ignored sometimes, and needs some cleaning up. So far, you got some good volumes going on, and a great layout, but for once, please finish it...
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...please.
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Those character concepts were actually for a Fallout 2 mod.
I agree with B.O.B., you need to clean that stuff up. AA away! Wouldn't be a bad thing to make the rest of the character either.
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So far, you got some good volumes going on, and a great layout, but for once, please finish it
I concur, can't wait to see how it's going along!
Those character concepts were actually for a Fallout 2 mod.
you sure? any reference?
afaIr, this Vinnie guy didn't make it into the game, although when we compare Hakunin and Sulik portraits from F2, he does look like quite a mixture of the two:
(http://cms.gram.pl/sites/fallout/UserFiles/Image/f2/th/sulik1.gif)(http://cms.gram.pl/sites/fallout/UserFiles/Image/f2/th/hakunin1.gif)
good luck!
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It was a mod someone was making a long time ago on NMA. I tried joining the team a lot. I don't think they ever finished the mod. I think it was called Weapons grade, as in "weapon grade plutonium", it was supposed to talk about all the secrets of the hundreds of other vaults. I think the fallout bible kind of contradicted the stuff they came up with.
No idea why they drew Gizmo though.
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haven't heard about it, but sounds like a cool idea for a mod! Morpheus also has his own talking head in the original game, though. I don't know: I'm quite sure I saw it in a news piece somewhere on Duck & Dover as well as on NMA. it's also tagged as 'an early concept art' in the NMA gallery . . . uh, whatever. :)
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(http://www.iamnotoriginal.com/images/pixel/vinnie_06.png)
There are differences and things. The AA is really bad, but that's what you get for not practicing something.
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hmm, are his eye sockets painted black? together will eyelids and everything? it's a bit strange. why his eyebrows are that harsh? does he wear a bone-mask? well, what you have here is a good base, but please, don't give up at this stage: continue! concentrate on details and if this is a skull-mask, make it more prominent. his eyes also need some polishing. doing that, you may want to switch to grayscale (or gradient-scale) to make the process of shaping volumes/values easier (it's a matter of preference, though).
here goes a *sloppy!* edit (aa + some dithering: why not?): maybe slightly overdone, but hope you'll get the point.
(http://jspade.republika.pl/vinnie_skurwed.png)