Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: rileygombart on April 30, 2008, 07:37:37 am

Title: [WIP]Platform Robot
Post by: rileygombart on April 30, 2008, 07:37:37 am

Hey guys.  I'm working on this robot for a platformer.  I definitely need some help.  Any big problems you guys see? 

(http://img168.imageshack.us/img168/8817/robot2gg1.png)

Thanks,
Riley

Title: Re: [WIP]Platform Robot
Post by: I Am Uh on May 01, 2008, 04:07:46 am

Made a Rough edit to show some things that could help.
(http://img209.imageshack.us/img209/9826/robot2gg17016936046iazayy8.gif)
It's mostly your A.A that needs work.

Title: Re: [WIP]Platform Robot
Post by: monteboyd on May 01, 2008, 07:52:29 am

I'd like to see him a little shinier. Here's a very quick edit:

(http://www.monteboyd.com/wotp_edits/rileygombart_robot_edit.gif)

Unless your intention is to make him look like old metal. But even in that case I think he needs to look a little bit more like metal.

Title: Re: [WIP]Platform Robot
Post by: chriskot on May 01, 2008, 04:17:32 pm

I like the edits. The reflected light off of the bottom of monteboyd's really helps the metallic look and I Am Uh's edit helps to round out the eye and left foot a bit more.

The only other big thing that I see is that his eye appears to be a little too far to the right side of his body (assuming that his eye is supposed to be centered). Alternatively, his right arm may be a bit too far forward on his body.

It actually reminds me a bit of the robots from the later sections of EarthBound.