Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Grynz on April 23, 2008, 05:17:35 am

Title: Tree
Post by: Grynz on April 23, 2008, 05:17:35 am

(http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/8660/lokxg0.png)

Critics, edits, everything is welcome.
(Also, please help me in picking a colour scheme)

Title: Re: Tree
Post by: PypeBros on April 23, 2008, 07:57:45 am

i'd suggest that you split the leaves in 2 or 3 "plates" rather than a single one like here -- which gives your tree a kind of mushroom style
also, (imho) your trunk should start having branches earlier.

(my reference : (http://139.165.223.2/~martin/scene/earthday08.gif) )

Title: Re: Tree
Post by: FuzzballFox on April 23, 2008, 06:37:41 pm

I've not got much to say about the rest, but the middle on with the different coloured bands on the truck look a little cheap, just recoloured, if they were seperated more by shading and not just colour...if you get what I mean...^^;

Title: Re: Tree
Post by: Grynz on April 23, 2008, 09:21:45 pm

Thanks for the crits  :)

(http://img521.imageshack.us/img521/9574/loksl7.png)

Better now?

Title: Re: Tree
Post by: infinitegames on April 25, 2008, 05:04:21 am

Cool! I like the stripe one the best.

Title: Re: Tree
Post by: yosh64 on April 26, 2008, 04:13:19 am

hey

I think alot of jaggy pixels need attention, and some the highlights smoothed. Also some more attention to the lighting also. But yea, the shading looks a bit messy to me.

I really don't like the highlighted overlap or whatever between each stripe, and actually prefer the original striped tree.

I also think you should add some more branches with leaves right under, and maybe divide the top leaves up as has kinda already been suggested.

Anyhows I'm currently trying todo an edit for ya.

cya