Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: King Croc on February 20, 2021, 07:54:52 am

Title: Poe (teletubbies) - First Real Pixel Art/Animation
Post by: King Croc on February 20, 2021, 07:54:52 am

Thought i'd sign up to some forums . Made a few in the past (several) but they all suck
looked up some tutorials on youtube and this is the result after learning how to structure an animation

edit: made the .gif bigger

Title: Re: Poe (teletubbies) - First Real Pixel Art/Animation
Post by: King Croc on February 28, 2021, 12:21:16 am

ha ha thanks guys youre too kind  :P :-[ :-X :-\ :-[ :P >:( ::)

Title: Re: Poe (teletubbies) - First Real Pixel Art/Animation
Post by: cels on March 09, 2021, 10:18:54 am

Is there anything specific you want people to critique?

For the sprite, I think it would help with more shading and contrast to establish Poe's shape, so he doesn't look like a cardboard cut-out. You have used a 2 shades of red on the body (i think) and a few more on the hands), but it's not very visible and doesn't do a lot to show whether he's more of a flat shape or a round ball.

For the animation, I guess you could try exaggerating the movement a bit more, and exaggerating the delay and momentum from the moment he turns his hips to the moment his arms move. It also seems a bit weird to lift the weapon over his head after striking. I'm not good at animations tho.