Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Cow on April 13, 2008, 01:20:20 am
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(http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v287/mccow28/bloodgropex.png)
This was a fun collaboration between Sherman Gill, Xion, and myself. :) 20 minute turns each before passing it on.
Progress animation can be viewed here (http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v287/mccow28/progress.gif).
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Collabs are so different from anything else. It's amazing :angel:.
This post might be worthless, on second though.
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First thing that comes to mind: Mmmmm, zombies.
Second thing? wtf balance?!?
She doesn't appear balanced. Both her feet are entirely on the right side of what I percieve to be her centre of gravity.
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The grass seems unharmed from the zombies arm coming up through it.
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The zombie hand bugs me also because it comes out of the ground not perpendicular to the ground. Doesn't seem shaded conisstent with light source.
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Of course it's not perpendicular, he's reaching for her, not the sky. The sky doesn't have breasts afaik.
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Well, there is two angles you can consider and that wasn't the right interpretation of what I meant by perpendicular. Here's an edit:
(http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e199/sharprm/zombie-1.gif)
And zombies are a feminist's dream: they are after a girl's brains, not her breasts :D
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Well, there is two angles you can consider and that wasn't the right interpretation of what I meant by perpendicular. Here's an edit:
(http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e199/sharprm/zombie-1.gif)
And zombies are a feminist's dream: they are after a girl's brains, not her breasts :D
Then why is there a bloody hand on one of her breasts? :D
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Perhaps she slaughtered a zombie and then groped herself!
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Then why is there a bloody hand on one of her breasts? :D
Because it's on the way from where he started. :P
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I'm thinking the shadow for girls legs don't agree with the shading and should be made to go behind her. I agree with Willows about balance issues.