Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: 1up on March 02, 2008, 07:01:03 pm

Title: [WIP] Zack be asplorin for tresur
Post by: 1up on March 02, 2008, 07:01:03 pm

Thought I'd make a topic here for some advice on how to improve this, since that's virtually impossible to get at PT :U

(http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/4582/zackandmaybewikiidkej4.png)

Title: Re: [WIP] Zack be asplorin for tresur
Post by: Sherman Gill on March 02, 2008, 07:08:02 pm

The hair looks separated from the head, and, at first glance, to be part of the jacket.
What's with the variable line width ??? Just doing it for the hell of it? You could make it better, IMO, by making the thinnest parts coincide with the parts most effected by the lightsource. :crazy:

Besides that, looks good. Original character design?

Title: Re: [WIP] Zack be asplorin for tresur
Post by: cerealkiller54 on March 02, 2008, 07:16:59 pm

Quote from: Sherman Gill on March 02, 2008, 07:08:02 pm

The hair looks separated from the head, and, at first glance, to be part of the jacket.
What's with the variable line width ??? Just doing it for the hell of it? You could make it better, IMO, by making the thinnest parts coincide with the parts most effected by the lightsource. :crazy:

Besides that, looks good. Original character design?

Not origional. Is from Zack and Wiki.
Anyway, the eyes are WAY too far apart.  :blind: