Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: iEmo on December 23, 2007, 08:12:01 am

Title: [WIP]Little mockup work in progress
Post by: iEmo on December 23, 2007, 08:12:01 am
Its just alittle mockup im working on with my old Sprite. Be harsh i dont care. I may or may not listen but i will try to listen. C+C Welcome but not needed.
(http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u113/Ruzzo125/swimming.png)(http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u113/Ruzzo125/swimming-1.png)
Title: Re: [WIP]Little mockup work in progress
Post by: griffy6 on December 23, 2007, 10:21:33 pm
First thing I would fix would be the anatomy of the character...that poor man has only one arm, and it's coming out of his back. You might want to define his legs more too, make them separate legs instead of one brown blob. I dunno, that one may just be me, but I only want to help :)