Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Snovind on November 13, 2007, 08:58:22 pm

Title: (wip) Character
Post by: Snovind on November 13, 2007, 08:58:22 pm

I was playing boxhead when i came up with this idea for the character.

(http://img115.imageshack.us/img115/306/headoe3.png)

(http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/3532/bodytg8.png)

C&C

I can't get the side-veiw to look right, please tell me what I'm doing wrong

Title: Re: (wip) Character
Post by: CrazyMLC on November 13, 2007, 11:26:13 pm

looks cool, very stylistic and it might look good in a game!
the shading is spot on also.

but the side view looks really thin compared to the front view.
the front and back view look like some foot ball player

while the side view looks like some bony geek teenager.
not to mention when i look at it closely, it doesn't look as shaded compared to the other views

i mean, i think is should look a bit more like this:
(http://img129.imageshack.us/img129/2056/bodytg8tp3.png)