Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Dokozai on November 11, 2007, 04:00:09 am

Title: some bunny type, thing.......
Post by: Dokozai on November 11, 2007, 04:00:09 am

well I got bored and decided to make a bunny looking thing! any constructive critisism would be nice.
 :)

(http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/5619/bunnytypethingla7.png)

Title: Re: some bunny type, thing.......
Post by: sharprm on November 11, 2007, 09:00:50 am

Really simple but i like the lineart. You should remove the purple outline though. Why not make it into a platformer mock up?

Title: Re: some bunny type, thing.......
Post by: sam-uk on November 11, 2007, 09:08:14 am

I took this onboard because I liked it. clean up the lines -> shade according to light source (if any) -> add minor detail such as facial expressions -> result

(http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc297/sam-uk/bunnyx.png)

Title: Re: some bunny type, thing.......
Post by: philipptr on November 11, 2007, 09:26:29 am

I really don't get why one would add a gradient to an edit.

@Dokzai: Your palette needs more contrast. The two brightest skintones are in my opinion too close to each other. That's also a reason why your AA looks so jaggy, because its gamma is so low. Also I don't think the hue-shift to a blue-ish brightest tone works, as normally one would hue shift to a warmer brightest tone, since in most natural situations the light source isn't neutral white or even colder than neutral white, but warmer.