Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Gekko on November 09, 2007, 06:52:07 pm

Title: [WIP] Dragon
Post by: Gekko on November 09, 2007, 06:52:07 pm
so ive been getting a little bored today of playing games the whole time and decided to pixel some and cause i need practice with curves (and cause ive just seen the terrible movie 'dragon wars' ) i decided to try a dragon.

(http://i92.photobucket.com/albums/l23/Miyabuu/dragon2.png)

but now i feel kinda blank and dont know what to add to it, it just looks pretty plain now, so any suggestions are welcome and of course any c+c on it so far :)

edit: heres a rough color version

(http://i92.photobucket.com/albums/l23/Miyabuu/dragon3.png)

currently trying out a few things for the scales to looks right
Title: Re: [WIP] Dragon
Post by: fil_razorback on November 10, 2007, 06:12:18 pm
I like your linework, you could make a great piece out of these.

Now for the crits :P
-Your palette lacks contrast
-The "belly" lines looked very furry but you've kinda lost this feeling in the colored version which looks a bit soft.
The tail edge is oddly shaped, what about shaping it more like a paint brush ?