Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Atum on November 07, 2007, 09:51:16 pm

Title: Pj Challenge
Post by: Atum on November 07, 2007, 09:51:16 pm

(http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y64/Sirchicken/PearWarrior.gif)

Pear Warrior...
C+C

(http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y64/Sirchicken/finalfruit.gif)

Title: Re: Pj Challenge
Post by: Skull on November 07, 2007, 10:22:32 pm

I love how 'big' he is. Real interesting. And I like the unusual palette.

Can I question what he's holding?!  ???

Title: Re: Pj Challenge
Post by: Atum on November 07, 2007, 10:24:57 pm

sycthes...yeah i understand that i need to give him a different weapon

Title: Re: Pj Challenge
Post by: sharprm on November 07, 2007, 11:08:53 pm

I think scythes are ok just you have drawn them wrong, they look like they would be used for digging. Drawn them so the blade is thin, not a bent triangle. If you need reference just google death.

Title: Re: Pj Challenge
Post by: TrevoriuS on November 07, 2007, 11:24:12 pm

Needless to say it's pillow shaded all over the place?

Title: Re: Pj Challenge
Post by: Atum on November 08, 2007, 01:52:03 am

your right...im not too sure i know how to shade mucles

Title: Re: Pj Challenge
Post by: TrevoriuS on November 08, 2007, 11:41:58 am

Well you could've chosen a better light angle so IE the shades would be more at the bottom than the top
But what I basdically ment is that theres not really a global depth, is it a circle on a 2D plane or an orb? thats the hard part to distinguish.
The darkness between two muscle is a bit too much, you should use that darkness only at the sides to create a sense of roundness