Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: sedgemonkey on November 22, 2005, 04:43:45 pm
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I'm going to put some effort into finetuning pieces rather than just being a lazy sob cranking out sketchy stuff. I was pretty happy with this one at first, but the longer I look at it the more I think I need to put in some editing.
Alex and Brian the Great already pointed out a couple flaws on this one (no hair contrast, breast is all out of whack). I'm open to color changes, bg suggestions or anything else although I want to keep the red light district flavor. It's currently at 15 colors and I want to keep it around that range if possible. Thx.
(http://www.pixeljoint.com/files/icons/full/px_booooty.gif)
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I don't like the scanline dithering. I think you should stick to flat shading, dithering really doesn't serve a purpose here...
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her left eye should be behind her nose more (eye to our right)
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Hey sedge, nice piece dude as usual loving the style ;) Good work.
Thanks,
Dan
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Very nice sedge though I think the hair and face could use a little more contrast.
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I guess no one else thinks so, but I know for a fact you can do better work than this. I've seen some fantastic work from you and this just doesn't seem to stand up to your usual quality. Obvious anatomical issues, Some contrast problems, and the line shading...well, I guess that one is your style choice. This one just doesn't stand out to me, and your stuff almost always stands out.
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I guess no one else thinks so, but I know for a fact you can do better work than this. I've seen some fantastic work from you and this just doesn't seem to stand up to your usual quality. Obvious anatomical issues, Some contrast problems, and the line shading...well, I guess that one is your style choice. This one just doesn't stand out to me, and your stuff almost always stands out.
I totally agree, Sedge can do much better than this.