Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: kake on October 22, 2007, 03:32:09 pm

Title: Action
Post by: kake on October 22, 2007, 03:32:09 pm

(http://photo.qq.com/qzone_v4/photo_view.htm?1.0.2.2#a_id=6d0749f7-da86-4857-a7a9-32d647f7b4bd&lloc=666d5f4e-5692-408b-84ab-0958b6ada373)
(http://photo.store.qq.com/http_imgload.cgi?/rurl2=c10220285c177686583f9ff52cc4410446e58dc5bf247c2c68abcf14758740b1e01be745c0c4531622c075ac5aa4df4f28d817446301fd9395805fa09303435c98e2d968238316f33d941cf436a70cfc1d573e85[img][img]http://photo.store.qq.com/http_imgload.cgi?/rurl2=78a63b03e6de55557aafd8e596a0906d48658eef214f7bacdce48fe3341d595f01271a37b5efd09813acff0efef788d0e34b6b2f707e398f9f987bbd56bb8fdc5f3615bb3a8095b68de6603e2331ce9c84601953)

Say your viewpoints

Title: Re: Action
Post by: kake on October 22, 2007, 03:34:17 pm

(http://photo.store.qq.com/http_imgload.cgi?/rurl2=78a63b03e6de55557aafd8e596a0906d48658eef214f7bacdce48fe3341d595f01271a37b5efd09813acff0efef788d0e34b6b2f707e398f9f987bbd56bb8fdc5f3615bb3a8095b68de6603e2331ce9c84601953)

Title: Re: Action
Post by: Lazycow on October 22, 2007, 04:50:27 pm

I would suggest a solid shadow (even if the background is textured)
(http://photo.store.qq.com/http_imgload.cgi?/rurl2=78a63b03e6de55557aafd8e596a0906d48658eef214f7bacdce48fe3341d595f01271a37b5efd09813acff0efef788d0e34b6b2f707e398f9f987bbd56bb8fdc5f3615bb3a8095b68de6603e2331ce9c84601953) <-old (http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/8677/fullshadownb0.gif) <-black (http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/733/solidgreyyg4.gif) <-grey shadow

Title: Re: Action
Post by: Senad on October 22, 2007, 06:27:41 pm

um, what is he doing? flying?

Title: Re: Action
Post by: pkmays on October 22, 2007, 06:47:50 pm

His shadow shouldn't be getting so huge, it really confused me. Actually, when he jumps, it should probably get smaller.

Title: Re: Action
Post by: Rydin on October 22, 2007, 07:24:55 pm

Yeah. His shadow should get smaller the farther away he is from the ground.
Also, in my opinion; when he's finally on his belly, there is far too much shadow, especially considering how subtle the lighting effects are on the sprite itself.

Oh, and its as if you can see too much of the backpack from the front when you compare it to it's size from the back view.  It does add to the animation, but technically shouldn't be there.

Pretty cool though.  What's this for?

Title: Re: Action
Post by: Dusty on October 24, 2007, 09:26:06 am

Ditch the shadow when he hits the ground.