Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: mrmean on November 18, 2005, 04:34:57 pm

Title: tree
Post by: mrmean on November 18, 2005, 04:34:57 pm

(http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v453/mrmean/tree2.png)
a tree wich i did a few days ago... cnc welcome

Title: Re: tree
Post by: Kazuya Mochu on November 18, 2005, 05:00:16 pm

it's very stilish!!

i don't know if thatswhat you wanted, but that bright line down the trunk makes it look like a hard edge, making the trunk look boxy.

looks nice though!!!

cheers,

Kaz

Title: Re: tree
Post by: Xion on November 19, 2005, 05:09:21 am

Aye, stylish indeed. That trunk is real nice, though, as Kazuya stated, it looks boxy or flat. I do like the way you dithered and twisted the trunk, though. Just tone down the highlight on the edge and make it a bit more lightsource consistent. *thumbs up*. Something about the treetop is buggin' me, but I can't quite put my finger on it.
Anywho, it looks good. Keep at it.

Title: Re: tree
Post by: mrmean on November 19, 2005, 03:26:09 pm

(http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v453/mrmean/tree3.png)
I fixed the highlight tone and coloured the backround, dont ask me why....

Title: Re: tree
Post by: Kazuya Mochu on November 19, 2005, 07:48:55 pm

it would be nice if you could add some depth to the hole thing. well the hole green thing. you see, you got all thoes separate pieces, thoes little puffs of leafs. the ones in the back should be more dark and desaturated. but not by much. this would help in the notion of depth. the way they are now, they could probably be a cardboard shape. but the trunk has depth, because you did that. you have darkened the parts that are further away.
try that on the top of the tree

take care,

Kazuya

Title: Re: tree
Post by: Grops on November 21, 2005, 05:43:26 am

(http://img292.imageshack.us/img292/932/treecopy2wq.gif)

Made a small edit giving you options, fixed a tree top and most of trunk to what I thought looked right.