Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Arysa on July 09, 2020, 10:42:51 am

Title: 4.Day of pixelart and first time animating
Post by: Arysa on July 09, 2020, 10:42:51 am

(https://i.imgur.com/GBwcv0k.png)

(https://i.imgur.com/0N4zxHl.gif)
Really enjoyed by that took me 5-6 hour to make

Im really bad at drawing some solid humanoid shades so i tried out at slime first(really need advice)
(i shared this on reddit yesterday but no one see so i decided to post here for critique)

I use aseprite
Also give me some inspiration or picture for draw training please

Title: Re: 4.Day of pixelart and first time animating
Post by: SeDiceBisonte on July 10, 2020, 12:23:42 pm

I'm no animator, but the volume of the slime seems a lot lower when it's moving up and down than when it's on the ground or at the apex of the jump.

There's also a frame as it starts to fall where the shading switches so that the shadow is on the top right and the highlight is on the bottom left, which is strange.

I like its little 'charge up' for the jump and the way the eyes move higher as it ascends and lower as it descends, though.

Title: Re: 4.Day of pixelart and first time animating
Post by: dpixel on July 11, 2020, 12:48:12 am

Looks great for a beginner.  Try a waving flag.