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Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: PASSOUT on August 22, 2007, 09:16:26 pm

Title: Bear On a Unicycle,My 1-Button Mock Up!
Post by: PASSOUT on August 22, 2007, 09:16:26 pm

(http://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i15/kasmember17/4-63.gif)

I made this for my 1 button mock up.The background will be changed,but for now I need to work on the bear and if some of the HUD elements need edditing do so.My main focus is on the bear so please C&C before the mock up deadline.

You have to balance the bear on the unicycle If it goes into the red he falls off,the more time ticks by the harder to balance.More point are awarded for staying in the green.Pressing the button makes the bar go left and releasing it makes it go right.

Title: Re: Bear On a Unicycle,My 1-Button Mock Up!
Post by: xavier_viiv on August 23, 2007, 07:38:43 am

(http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/8144/463yj8.gif)

playin with dither^^...i dun like the shoulder,so erase them a little..it`s cute though^^

hope you like it..>,,<

Title: Re: Bear On a Unicycle,My 1-Button Mock Up!
Post by: PASSOUT on August 23, 2007, 03:51:07 pm

Thanks for the help here is my update,(http://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i15/kasmember17/4-64.gif).

Title: Re: Bear On a Unicycle,My 1-Button Mock Up!
Post by: Danik on August 23, 2007, 04:31:50 pm

I think the bear blends in too much with the background.

(http://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i15/kasmember17/4-64.gif) (http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v723/morbid30/temp/bearedit.gif)

Title: Re: Bear On a Unicycle,My 1-Button Mock Up!
Post by: bengo on August 23, 2007, 11:50:26 pm

While he does need to stand out more, I think we need to work on color choice and just, anatomy, correct posture, etc.

First off, the bear just doesn't seem like he cares that he's juggling, he needs to pay more attention to what he's juggling, http://math.berkeley.edu/~hutching/personal/bio/juggling.jpg.

Seems your having some trouble with the legs, looked around google video a bit and found this: http://video.google.com/videoplay?docid=-8867862777896510907&q=bicycle&total=24350&start=0&num=10&so=0&type=search&plindex=4 the first minute or so have some good showings of how the legs work in that type of situation.

Not exactly sure why that white thing is on his chest, it's not on any bear toys I've seen, any movies I've seen, any cartoon movies I've seen or any actual bears I've seen(http://www.solarnavigator.net/animal_kingdom/animal_images/Brown_bear_rearing.jpg).

Title: Re: Bear On a Unicycle,My 1-Button Mock Up!
Post by: Larwick on August 23, 2007, 11:56:31 pm

PASSOUT, it should be noted that in Danik's edit he shows that a darker colour around the bear helps. However, replacing the darker brown with an almost black colour doesn't help, i would use black and the previous dark brown (perhaps darkened slightly) in order to keep a smoothness to the shading. I don't think you need to dither yet.

Title: Re: Bear On a Unicycle,My 1-Button Mock Up!
Post by: chigsam on August 24, 2007, 12:58:53 am

Im not sure about the 3rd color on the bear but, lightening up the background, changing his eye position, and changing the bear colors is what i did.

(http://xs218.xs.to/xs218/07345/bear_001.gif)

Title: Re: Bear On a Unicycle,My 1-Button Mock Up!
Post by: xavier_viiv on August 24, 2007, 03:56:05 am

well...he said tat the background will b changed later...so keep on the bear thingy...
i like the eyes on chigsam`s edit..and the reference tat bengoshia gave is good i think^^

keep up the work..o_O.d

hope this help

Title: Re: Bear On a Unicycle,My 1-Button Mock Up!
Post by: PASSOUT on August 26, 2007, 06:33:45 pm

UPDATE(http://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i15/kasmember17/4-65.gif)

Title: Re: Bear On a Unicycle,My 1-Button Mock Up!
Post by: bengo on August 26, 2007, 06:35:10 pm

Is this..... a joke? Why is it uh...... scribbly?

Title: Re: Bear On a Unicycle,My 1-Button Mock Up!
Post by: Genadinio on August 26, 2007, 07:44:14 pm

Its not a joke .. I think he is very nervous :D

Title: Re: Bear On a Unicycle,My 1-Button Mock Up!
Post by: PASSOUT on August 26, 2007, 10:45:49 pm

UPDATE(http://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i15/kasmember17/4-66.gif)

Title: Re: Bear On a Unicycle,My 1-Button Mock Up!
Post by: Ryan Cordel on August 26, 2007, 11:37:41 pm

Seriously dude, don't go down that path, we offer you advice to help your lil' mockup and you throw shit at us. Totally not cool.

Title: Re: Bear On a Unicycle,My 1-Button Mock Up!
Post by: bengo on August 26, 2007, 11:42:12 pm

It's not like we can help him anyway, his ability to draw is equal to that of an 8 year old. The hand looks like he's pointing a finger at us rather than flipping us off, it's just terrible(i.e. complete and utter shit).

Title: Re: Bear On a Unicycle,My 1-Button Mock Up!
Post by: Helm on August 27, 2007, 01:13:56 am

This thread, locked.

Passout and bengoshia get a strike. Enjoy.