Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: .need.4.speed. on November 12, 2005, 05:26:01 pm
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hi i made this awhile back and i fixed it up a bit.
(http://img21.imageshack.us/img21/5135/animation27wl.gif)
cnc is wanted
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try making the lines smoother, and more precise. For example, the middle line on the N is very crooked.
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I think the crooked lines were made on purpose, correct? If so, make the completely straight lines somewhat crooked.
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yeah i made the lines crooked because its like my handwriting
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oh ok then, you should do what Darien said, make the straight lines a little crooked as well. It looks like it was an accident with some lines crooked, some lines straight.
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This looks nice for what it needs to be. However, there are a few things that could be improved. Firstly, as others have mentioned, the lines that are straight now could be made a bit crooked to match the style of the rest. And unless your handwriting is exactly precise, you might consider making a bit of space or overlap in the corner of the "N" and the intersection of the "4" where the separately drawn lines intersect. A minor nitpick: the bottom of the "4" appears to draw itself; it appears while the pencil is moving away to draw the "S". Also, since pencil lines are rarely actually black, you may want to consider making the lines a medium gray. If you really feel like getting fancy, you can try to make the pencil change angles as it draws.