Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: am_pm on August 16, 2007, 01:32:34 am

Title: A tree
Post by: am_pm on August 16, 2007, 01:32:34 am

I saw a very neat looking tree on the drive home from town today and though I would pixel it. Well, something close to it. How's it look?

(http://img526.imageshack.us/img526/6845/treeoh4.png)

Title: Re: A tree
Post by: Ryan Cordel on August 16, 2007, 01:37:39 am

First thing, you have multiple light sources for all the 'sections' of leaves, one from tomp, one from the bottom right, one from the middle left, and so forth. Fix that, and further more, I see that the trunk seems a bit small, maybe thicken it and make the roots on the bottom look more like, well, roots (Make smaller ones too.).

Title: Re: A tree
Post by: xavier_viiv on August 22, 2007, 05:06:26 am

--if you still work on it,cos i find it nice--

i like the tree..maybe if there`s a reference--real picture-- of that tree...^^
i think the light source is coming from front..and that`s showing deepness,so there`s highlight everywhere...^^
but it just me,i think>.,<