Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: json on November 11, 2005, 08:42:05 pm

Title: cool goggles?
Post by: json on November 11, 2005, 08:42:05 pm

I made this as an application for a gfx job. Ive been watching this forum-just never registered. id be happy to have any comments

(http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y134/json10131/TheAlchemist5.png)

http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y134/json10131/TheAlchemist5.png


err cut me a lil slack (im just 14) :D

Title: Re: cool goggles?
Post by: Ryumaru on November 11, 2005, 10:21:08 pm

14 year olds unite!(also 14)
hmm, on the collar and part of the shirt you blended teh shadows in a way that looks bleh,also the hair could be shaded better. in the middle of the clumps of hair have some shading to suggest individual strands.

Title: Re: cool goggles?
Post by: flamingpyroxxx on November 12, 2005, 01:59:59 am

lol i didnt know there were so many 14 year olds, im 14 as well. Anyway, what kind of gfx job are u applying for at 14? That is a pretty good pic, though the the left goggle should be kind of changed...it looks weird in comparison to the way the head is turned and stuff.

Title: Re: cool goggles?
Post by: json on November 12, 2005, 03:45:48 am

thxs, i guess every art is awork in progress :)