Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Elk on August 14, 2007, 02:21:52 pm

Title: Need help with sprites
Post by: Elk on August 14, 2007, 02:21:52 pm
(http://img259.imageshack.us/img259/3716/needhelpwq3.png)

i cant seem to make a good side sprite of the front view
the sprites will be used for a ninja-based game like naruto so it has to look more anime-stylish :3

so i ask you to give me some hints please =/
Title: Re: Need help with sprites
Post by: Fingerfoods on August 14, 2007, 08:38:09 pm
I know that this isn't what you asked for, but I edited the front view a bit to be more 'anime-ish'. Basically, I added another shade to smooth out some of the more jagged lines and modified the shading to look a bit more cel-shaded.

(http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/9774/needhelpwq3zk4.png)

What you have so far for a side view looks fine to me, just color it in. And, incidentally, the arms and legs are much too spread apart.
Title: Re: Need help with sprites
Post by: Elk on August 15, 2007, 07:46:37 am
heh thanks for trying to help :)
but the side view looks so weird...i dont know >_<
Title: Re: Need help with sprites
Post by: Stefano on August 16, 2007, 06:33:37 am
I think the main problem with the side view you did is anatomical. In the side view the little guy is standing stiff as a plastic doll. Plus, there's not enough volume on his chest and belly. Check out my quick edit:
(http://img181.imageshack.us/img181/502/needhelpwq3tc3.png)
I've simply added volume (guts, bones) and bent his limbs a little so he'd look more relaxed.

Side views are tricky. I usually Google some reference poses when necessity arises, even if my character is cartoony.

Cheers,
-Stefano
Title: Re: Need help with sprites
Post by: Elk on August 17, 2007, 03:42:58 pm
hm thanks but somehow the face is bothering me O.O
Title: Re: Need help with sprites
Post by: xavier_viiv on August 21, 2007, 03:35:29 pm
(http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/966/needhelpwq3tc3yb4.gif)

just add few pixels on jawline..>.,<..cos me myself wanna know how it should be...
i like the idea^^,im hoping to see some animation on these sprites though>.,<..

hope this can help..

PS: sorry for bad english...m(_ _)m
Title: Re: Need help with sprites
Post by: RhysD on August 25, 2007, 11:08:34 am
the darker shades you have near the outline makes the outline very jaggy when viewed at normal zoom, maybe lighten these colours or remove them?