Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: vb64 on July 04, 2007, 10:12:56 am

Title: Newbie & Game
Post by: vb64 on July 04, 2007, 10:12:56 am

Hi Ive just stumbled upon this group.

I am coding a new 2d Platform game called snotland.

All the tile work is done and i have just started doing the main hero sprite 'Groblar'

(http://img115.imageshack.us/img115/191/groblarvu0.gif)

There he is. All one frame of him !.

Ok back to work on the other 80 frames or so :)

Comments greatly appreciated

Title: Re: Newbie & Game
Post by: smiker on July 04, 2007, 11:38:29 am

heh...i don't see any picture, i only see a fortunecity advertising...you should host it on free servers like imageshack or photobucket...

Title: Re: Newbie & Game
Post by: philipptr on July 04, 2007, 12:07:43 pm

(http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/6145/groblargp9.gif)

Title: Re: Newbie & Game
Post by: Elrinth on July 04, 2007, 10:06:18 pm

very james pond alike... not sure what to give cvrit on.. but perhaps the legs are a tad too short, the arms too short and so on? maybe strange pose for the legs, looks like he's an old geezer with trouble in his thigh or something.
hope this helps in some random way. maybe not easy enough to give crit on anything since I haven't seen anything else from the game.. monsters, backgrounds and so on.

Title: Re: Newbie & Game
Post by: Aline on July 04, 2007, 10:58:13 pm

If his arms and legs were shorter, he would look like Horacio from Turma da Monica (Monica's Gang), a Brazilian comic.  :lol: