Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: smiker on July 03, 2007, 12:24:27 pm

Title: Talant Captain
Post by: smiker on July 03, 2007, 12:24:27 pm

i've spent two hours in this sprite...but i cant make the armor look an armor with shoulder movement....
can you suggest any ideas? it's suposed to be a military captain, but i don't have any inspiration right now....
(http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/6301/talantcaptaincr0.gif)

Title: Re: Talant Captain
Post by: PypeBros on July 03, 2007, 12:55:58 pm

i'd suggest an armor that is wider on the chest than on the belly.

Title: Re: Talant Captain
Post by: LoTekK on July 03, 2007, 01:04:52 pm

I'd suggest... finishing something? Not being snarky here, just noticing that you have a number of unfinished pieces that have received good crits and suggestions.

Title: Re: Talant Captain
Post by: smiker on July 03, 2007, 01:06:51 pm

allright, capted. thank you for the advice, cause i'm getting too distanced and i'm unfinishing all pieces i do. so i will update them over today.