Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: PASSOUT on June 27, 2007, 03:08:34 pm

Title: [WIP]DEATH
Post by: PASSOUT on June 27, 2007, 03:08:34 pm
This is some avatar I made up.I don't realy know how to show wrinkles in the cloth

This is the hooded grimreaper:(http://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i15/kasmember17/ddd-30.gif)

Thanks for reading.
Title: Re: [WIP]DEATH
Post by: Ragnarok on June 27, 2007, 03:14:45 pm
Nice pixel! However, the head doesn't really seem to 'pop', and around his mouth, probably due to the similar colours used for both the teeth and the rest of the bone, they blend a little. Also... the shading at the top of the skull makes it seem a little flat. I'm not sure, but maybe shading that the same as the rest of the face would improve it? Other than that, it's rather good.

-Ragnarok
Title: Re: [WIP]DEATH
Post by: PASSOUT on June 27, 2007, 04:19:38 pm
dit:(http://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i15/kasmember17/ddd-34.gif)

Not shure what to do with the skull.
Title: Re: [WIP]DEATH
Post by: Xion on June 27, 2007, 07:42:20 pm
Hey, whoa, ew, bacdafucup.
The new one is way way worse than the old one. Random dots all over, wtf? And what happened to the skull? The skull was cool, man...
The best way to get cloth would be to just look at some cloth and then see how it drapes and folds and stuff.
I think the hilights are too bright.
Title: Re: [WIP]DEATH
Post by: Zero on June 27, 2007, 08:28:53 pm
Hey, whoa, ew, bacdafucup.
The new one is way way worse than the old one. Random dots all over, wtf? And what happened to the skull? The skull was cool, man...

I second that opinion. The head on the new one looks more like a human head (with flesh) than a skull. Also, the "hood" really doesn't read as one. Like Xion said, the highlights are too bright. And it reads as being much too thick to be cloth.
Title: Re: [WIP]DEATH
Post by: PASSOUT on June 28, 2007, 12:09:47 am
I took the colors from the 16 color pallet.I don't want to break out of the mold and use new colors.
The best way to get cloth would be to just look at some cloth and then see how it drapes and folds and stuff.
I did and thats what I came up with but I wil toil away using the C+Cs as my guide.
Title: Re: [WIP]DEATH
Post by: Xion on June 28, 2007, 01:38:26 am
The 16-col palette is pretty useless if you're working in greyscale. I think you'd benefit from choosing your own colors.