Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Vans on June 16, 2007, 05:53:53 am

Title: Rpg style
Post by: Vans on June 16, 2007, 05:53:53 am

Hi guys, im making some sprites for a game, and i'd like to get some comments from pros  :P :
(http://img237.imageshack.us/img237/6049/ubercutenesspr1.gif)

Thanks

Title: Re: Rpg style
Post by: poingo on June 16, 2007, 08:58:30 pm

I'm not a pro by any means at all, but it looks great to me!  Good job on the shading!  I love the style you used!

Title: Re: Rpg style
Post by: bengo on June 21, 2007, 10:11:54 am

Okay, so I made some edits:
(http://img406.imageshack.us/img406/1770/rpgeditzy3.gif)
I added a light source, yours was like... yeah, I also added some AAing to it, gave it some more features and a more realistic color, I also put the eye glare in the correct direction.

Title: Re: Rpg style
Post by: philipptr on June 21, 2007, 02:17:57 pm

Quote from: bengoshia on June 21, 2007, 10:11:54 am

Okay, so I made some edits:
(http://img406.imageshack.us/img406/1770/rpgeditzy3.gif)
I added a light source, yours was like... yeah, I also added some AAing to it, gave it some more features and a more realistic color, I also put the eye glare in the correct direction.

The dithering doesn't work at all. Looks like his skin is extremly rough.

Title: Re: Rpg style
Post by: AlienQuark on June 21, 2007, 05:56:00 pm

bengoshia, your edit kinda took the whole style a step backwards. This base was perfectly fine with the simple style. I'm pretty sure it was made to look intentionally non-realistic. Just a guess.

This little base here is really cool, I might try and dress him up all snazzy like.

Title: Re: Rpg style
Post by: chigsam on June 21, 2007, 07:18:31 pm

beng's looks like its moldy

Title: Re: Rpg style
Post by: bengo on June 21, 2007, 08:11:30 pm

Eh, I guess you guys are right, I was half-awake when I made that..... The point I wanted to originally get across was that the original sprite doesn't really have a light source.

Title: Re: Rpg style
Post by: Andy Tran on June 22, 2007, 04:13:26 am

Not a bad edit. I think removing the mouth makes him look cuter and more RPG style. Some clothing could help. Good luck.

Title: Re: Rpg style
Post by: Vans on June 23, 2007, 06:29:55 am

Done! added hair, clothes and modified the base a bit  :lol:
(http://img67.imageshack.us/img67/5784/newpu4.png)

Title: Re: Rpg style
Post by: UncleSporky on June 23, 2007, 11:25:45 pm

I like it a lot, that's very nice highlighting on the hair.  One crit - he looks a little like he has a pot belly at 1x due to the lines on the sides of the shirt and the bit of shading just above the crotch.  Makes it look like he's stuffed into his pants and bulging out.  IMO, of course, and if that's what you wanted then it's great.  It's great anyways!