Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: JWW on June 12, 2007, 06:39:03 pm

Title: Jake
Post by: JWW on June 12, 2007, 06:39:03 pm

I don't post here enough, so here I go.
my latest: (http://img501.imageshack.us/img501/7710/jakepcpjcopyzg7.gif)
14 colours

Title: Re: Jake
Post by: dragonrc on June 12, 2007, 08:32:27 pm

Looking good!
Only crit is that the dark part of him is a bit too dark. And his skateboard/weapon blends too much with his pants.
(http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x145/dragonrc_/jakepcpjcopyzg7ed.gif)
Very quick edit to show you what I meant.
You can use the highlights on the pants for highlighting darker parts like the knee protecor and the skateboard/weapon.

Title: Re: Jake
Post by: Sherman Gill on June 12, 2007, 09:41:27 pm

I have to disagree about it being too dark. I think it works well as it is, besides maybe some inefficient color usage.

Title: Re: Jake
Post by: AdamAtomic on June 13, 2007, 10:53:48 pm

hey JWW this rocks, I like it a lot.  Only thing that looks out of place is the lower legs, combination of shading and outline makes it look really blocky compared to the rest of the character.