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Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: UnitZ on June 10, 2007, 09:04:48 pm

Title: [WIP] another building
Post by: UnitZ on June 10, 2007, 09:04:48 pm

This is my second attempt (the first was copying tutorial) to draw building. Show me my mistakes at this part of work (making form and coloring)
(http://kulakov_do.zelnet.ru/building1.gif)

sorry my poor english :)

Title: Re: [WIP] another building
Post by: Obsidian on June 10, 2007, 09:19:53 pm

Well right now it's lacking a lot of detail, so it's a bit boring. And replace the dark outline between the two sections for a lighter color, they look separate as it is.

Title: Re: [WIP] another building
Post by: UnitZ on June 11, 2007, 08:51:04 am

Thanks for advice! :y:
small update
(http://kulakov_do.zelnet.ru/building1_2.gif)

Title: Re: [WIP] another building
Post by: piotrek255 on June 11, 2007, 01:46:47 pm

great shape, everything is clean, but i would tone down the color a bit, this yellow is burning my eyes. Also, the thing on the window beside the door, whether it's a broken or there are soem bars / spider web thing, use a shade that is not so dark, a slightly lighter tone.

Title: Re: [WIP] another building
Post by: UnitZ on June 12, 2007, 08:37:02 pm

I decide to get away thing on window.
I dont have idea how to draw sign "no smoking", i draw only red circle, but cigarette.. i cant draw it. can you help me?
the white rectangle is the place for advertisement
(http://kulakov_do.zelnet.ru/building1-4.GIF)

Title: Re: [WIP] another building
Post by: Obsidian on June 12, 2007, 10:25:27 pm

Looking better. But I think you should remove the orange thing and the no smoking sign. The roofs are too empty as well; there wouldn't be roof access on the building if there was nothing on the roof.

Title: Re: [WIP] another building
Post by: UnitZ on June 13, 2007, 05:49:51 pm

(http://kulakov_do.zelnet.ru/building1_5.gif)
update. thanks for your advices  :y:

Title: Re: [WIP] another building
Post by: philipptr on June 13, 2007, 06:13:14 pm

nice update. colourchange works very well. Still it misses something intresting. There are no textures or other eye-catching aspects about this picture. If you just made it to test isometric techniques it's okay. If you wanted make something beautiful you will have to work on it a little more (at least imo) ;)

ot: just curious: any chance you are the same person as chigsam? ::)

Title: Re: [WIP] another building
Post by: UnitZ on June 13, 2007, 06:50:48 pm

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nice update. colourchange works very well. Still it misses something intresting. There are no textures or other eye-catching aspects about this picture. If you just made it to test isometric techniques it's okay. If you wanted make something beautiful you will have to work on it a little more (at least imo)

thanks. at least, i'm not finish, it's only begin  8) i planned to add some more details

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ot: just curious: any chance you are the same person as chigsam?

no, i'm not he :D

Title: Re: [WIP] another building
Post by: Pikita on June 16, 2007, 06:28:28 pm

very nice i made  quick edit to it to show u some ideas

(http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v473/freddie_v101/factort.png)


remove the windows and where the red is make like the building owners name and comapnay stuff i dunno lol just sounds good :P

extend path and road and maybe have path from side door

have a helipad on tall building

maybe some people and vehicles
?


any way good job