Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: tecnologgamer on January 09, 2020, 01:37:59 pm

Title: [Feedback] Chloe Grace portrait
Post by: tecnologgamer on January 09, 2020, 01:37:59 pm
Hi there, I am pratice a lot face and portraits and I started doing in great canvas to get knowledge more about the face.

I saw Carrie the Strange feature the actress Chloe Grace and I decide try to make this face. I dunno, but I feel that the head is more large and I still struggle to do the cheek bone accurately, besides I can spot it easily with my eye when I look to faces, that dark lines on her left side is because I saw a photo of her 3/4 side and I notice a slope between the face and the cheek, maybe it happens because she was smiling when it was took. The highlights from right side is because (I can totally be wrong about that because I notice this after saw many light/dark in faces), but there is the cheek bone, like I said I can be totally wrong.

(https://i.ibb.co/yWhQBbF/Chloe-Grace-1.png)
Title: Re: [Feedback] Chloe Grace portrait
Post by: MysteryMeat on January 09, 2020, 07:13:25 pm
Those eyes are WAYYYY too close together, man. Move em out a few pixels.
Title: Re: [Feedback] Chloe Grace portrait
Post by: tecnologgamer on January 09, 2020, 08:44:39 pm
(https://i.ibb.co/d2pf413/Chloe-Grace-1.png)

I feel akward at first time, but after up the eyebrown a little up, too. It's fell more better and pretty, thanks MysteryMeat for helping me everytime ^^.
Title: Re: [Feedback] Chloe Grace portrait
Post by: dpixel on January 12, 2020, 05:54:43 am
Moved the eyes out even more and down.  Widen the shoulders. Lengthened the neck too.
Edit:
(https://i.imgur.com/3TGMGze.png)
Title: Re: [Feedback] Chloe Grace portrait
Post by: tecnologgamer on January 12, 2020, 08:25:35 pm
I did the changes, also I try to give more value to the highlights, too.

(https://i.ibb.co/mXkFwWq/Chloe-Grace.png)