Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Boraka on January 07, 2020, 08:02:35 pm

Title: [NSFW] [Nudity] [CC] Vaporwave girl
Post by: Boraka on January 07, 2020, 08:02:35 pm

Hi there!

I'm working on a poster for decorating my new home!

I would like for you to critique it, and point some things you think can be improved.

(https://i.imgur.com/Jr9dUIC.png)

From my point of view, the weaker part of the image, at the moment, is the "alien" thingy in between the thitghts, it is supposed to be a facehugger-like creature, but I am not sure if it can be read very well, also, I don't know how to make it better ???.

I was thinking in give it a "retro screen" feel also, with a finish like this:

(https://i.imgur.com/6iMo3KB.png)

Any thoghts are welcome!

Title: Re: [NSFW] [Nudity] [CC] Vaporwave girl
Post by: Mathcong on January 10, 2020, 05:35:00 pm

you could give it more of a segmented look, i think thats how facehuggers generally look,
also found the rectangle background a bit distracting, made it darker:

(https://i.imgur.com/o82vJLn.png)

Title: Re: [NSFW] [Nudity] [CC] Vaporwave girl
Post by: Boraka on January 14, 2020, 09:24:05 pm

Thanks a lot for the feedback!

I did an edit in the creature, and hopefully is so much better now, thanks for the suggestion  ;D

(https://i.imgur.com/qP1Dc5Y.png)

Regarding the background, I agree that is distracting because is very busy, but that was kind of the aesthetic I was going for. In any case, I will think about maybe changing the pattern or the colors, but trying to keep it kind of the same line.

Any other feedback is very welcome still.

Thanks again!