Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Sherman Gill on May 02, 2007, 07:58:31 am

Title: Losing battle with the Joint
Post by: Sherman Gill on May 02, 2007, 07:58:31 am

(http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b139/InaneAndMatu/SelectYourWarriorSuper3.gif)
Much thanks to Adam so far (Who probably can still find more things wrong with it then Freud's mental health).
So yeah, for the weekly challenge at the pixel joint. Not sure how it's going, and I'm hoping the color choices are as nice to me on a non-stupidshitheaded laptop as they are on it.

Edit: Wow I really suck. Forgot IMG tags and put this in General Discussion. Sorry about that.

Title: Re: Losing battle with the Joint
Post by: AdamAtomic on May 02, 2007, 06:34:51 pm

damn right!!  though the structure of the knight is better now, i think your lettering still needs a LOT of work!

Title: Re: Losing battle with the Joint
Post by: Sherman Gill on May 02, 2007, 08:28:44 pm

(http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b139/InaneAndMatu/SelectYourWarriorSuperFINBIG.gif) Maybe done?

And I always forget to save early steps, so here's an animation starting about an hour and a half inward:
(http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b139/InaneAndMatu/SelectYWWhib.gif)

Title: Re: Losing battle with the Joint
Post by: Cow on May 02, 2007, 10:45:11 pm

On an LCD, that blue shade looks extremely garish. Probably works fine on an CRT, though. :/

Title: Re: Losing battle with the Joint
Post by: Rydin on May 02, 2007, 11:44:59 pm

My biggest crit was going to be the readability of the numbers, but you seemed to have that under control.  And as mccow said, the blue hue is working against you--I admire it's liberal application, but I think you could blend it in better...perhaps tone it down?