Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Fernox on April 25, 2007, 10:42:52 pm
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hello !!! first at all: im from chile, south america, so my english SUCK. i will try to do my best ;D
well, i made a sprite of Gon, from the anime: Hunter X Hunter (the only anime that I really like, the rest suck XD(just kidding)
(http://img338.imageshack.us/img338/3066/gonfinaltz3.png)
I like it. its not very well, but I like it, BUT i hate the face and hands. if someone can help me only with face and hands, i will be very thankfully (its good that word ??? XD)
thanks
bye
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you are making a common mistake with your shading, you have given your character depth, but no real light-source. all your shading is what we call 'pillowshaded' where as you shade an object from the center outwards. I'd suggest imagining there is a light on the top right of your canvas.
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Yes, you have trouble with shading and with his body too, his look a strange...
If you paint just stand in this position - it's first my sketch, but if you fight - maybe second variant be useful - it's just quick sketchs for understanding position hand and foot(or this link http://www.fightersgeneration.com/characters/andy-a.html (http://www.fightersgeneration.com/characters/andy-a.html))
(http://img124.imageshack.us/img124/2111/fernox01ge5.gif)
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helloooo !!!
I open my eyes, and I notice that the old version sucks, so I make a new version, using the idea of mangust about the position (I use the second position)
here's my new version (I use the OVA's clothes) :
(http://img112.imageshack.us/img112/3156/goncomparacionqb2.png)
I hope you like it, because I'm really happy with the result.
bye
PD:(I love this forum :crazy:)
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honestly I like the first verision better.... mayby not in a anatmoy way but I think the first one is better.... Gon doesn't have that kind of muscles......
I think though you should make his shoulder bigger in the first verision...
well, I'm a noob, just my thoughts.... listen to Mangust anyway to learn the right proportions..
:y:
//Albin
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(http://img82.imageshack.us/img82/610/goncomparacionqb2po6.png)
I couldn't help myself :P