Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: ceddo on April 21, 2007, 06:53:26 pm

Title: Player Avatar System [nudity?]
Post by: ceddo on April 21, 2007, 06:53:26 pm
Hey,

I need to make a player avatar system that uses a naked base, on which I will superpose weapons and armor. The idea is that the player can see which armor he is wearing any time, and looks cool with it.

Naked base:

(http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i126/seedwhakk/100x150iconsnew001.gif)
Notice he's missing a head and a... the latter won't be done :)

I inspired myself with Fool's beautiful Anika piece, as a pose reference and guide. Thank you for any crits and comments!
Ceddo.
Title: Re: Player Avatar System [nudity?]
Post by: eck on April 21, 2007, 09:36:02 pm
what...?  no black peoples?

also, the shading seems a bit scratchy, and could be cleaned up withought as much sketchy feel to it. 
Title: Re: Player Avatar System [nudity?]
Post by: Josiah on April 21, 2007, 09:44:14 pm
Some parts of the shading do seem a bit rough in places
the knee could get smoothed a bit

looking great so far though
Title: Re: Player Avatar System [nudity?]
Post by: Elrinth on April 22, 2007, 10:20:47 am
very well done!

my only points of crit are outlines to be fixed. right nipple (left from viewer point) should be moved slightly. His breastpart looks very flat. Perhaps bring it out somewhat?
Slightly too tall legs? the part from knee and down is good.
Well I'm not sure. Looks awesome nevertheless
Title: Re: Player Avatar System [nudity?]
Post by: ceddo on April 22, 2007, 11:42:01 am
I worked for hours on this yesterday, but realized that there are so many anatomy mistakes regarding pose, distances from arm to waist that I just kept my old version. The naked man won't actually be seen naked much anyways, so I don't think it will have much of an effect.

Here's a superposed outfit for him. :)

(http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i126/seedwhakk/100x150icons008.gif)
Title: Re: Player Avatar System [nudity?]
Post by: morfius on April 22, 2007, 06:16:27 pm
Nice job Ceddo. What other types of outfits do you plan on making?
Title: Re: Player Avatar System [nudity?]
Post by: ceddo on April 22, 2007, 08:24:01 pm
Not actually sure yet, although my guess is a sh*tload of armor sets, swords, shields, hairdos, shoes/sandals/boots and helmets!