Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Luzeke on April 16, 2007, 07:21:40 pm

Title: Sand Tile
Post by: Luzeke on April 16, 2007, 07:21:40 pm

I'm working on the graphics for the intro level for my game, and I'm not sure about what I've come up with so far. Here it is:

(http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j135/mr_norris/sandwiptile.gif)

Pic 1. Just the tiles put together

Pic 2. The red line shows where the player can stand, go against.

Pic 3. Tiles broken up.

There's supposed to be tufts of grass here and there, and an occasional bush. Though I haven't come that far yet.

I know it doesn't look right at some level, but I can't pinpoint it (I'm too tired, been up very verry long today, allnighters takes their toll =P )

Heres the sillouette of my main char (if you want a reference to the tiles):

(http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j135/mr_norris/idle.gif)

Any suggestions, edits and crits are extremely welcome.

EDIT// Moved the pics to photobucket. I couldn't get into pb yesterday for some reason so I put the files on my schoolserver instead.

Title: Re: Sand Tile
Post by: Luzeke on April 18, 2007, 01:06:38 pm

I've worked on the tiles a little more, and I've gotten to this:

(http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j135/mr_norris/desertwiptile2.gif)

I'm still not sure about the actual sand, although I like the grass, they could be improved more possibly.

Here's the pieces:

(http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j135/mr_norris/desertparts.gif)

Title: Re: Sand Tile
Post by: snader on April 18, 2007, 06:04:45 pm

i like the silhouetted, but the sand and dirt look rather messy.
whats the green square stuff?