Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: and2 on April 08, 2007, 12:47:17 pm

Title: Pixel's that need cc
Post by: and2 on April 08, 2007, 12:47:17 pm

Hey everyone.

Chubby preditor.
(http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/4781/predfin2hn5.png)
-not happy with the spear, any cc on that would be appreciated

Zombie Bunny.
(http://img265.imageshack.us/img265/8968/mehht2.png)
-unsure of how to do legs
-unsure if readable
-trouble with making heart look like its hanging out of the hole in the bunny's chest
UPDATE:
(http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/7926/dropit6fl9.png)
-thanks fool for helpful edit.

All CC is very much appreciated  ;D
_And2

Title: Re: chubby predator
Post by: Malor on April 08, 2007, 01:11:02 pm

I like the idea, but I think you went overboard with the style dither, and the face, is kinda boring, I would have ade it more trollish, but I assume that is not what you were going for, because you did not put it in, in which case I shall shut up..

Title: Re: chubby predator
Post by: setz on April 08, 2007, 07:28:20 pm

I made a very rough, quick, sketch of hands for you, and pointed something out to me; his back arm is down lower than his front arm, even though its supposed to be in the backgrounda bit, you should move it up a few pixels.

(http://sj-gfx.com/b/pred.PNG)

Title: Re: chubby predator
Post by: and2 on April 09, 2007, 01:32:36 am

Thanks for the cc and edits.
Update:
(http://img128.imageshack.us/img128/1189/predfindl3.png)

Eh?

Title: Re: chubby predator
Post by: Malor on April 09, 2007, 01:36:34 am

well, I like the spear head, but the hand is drawn in a way that makes it look like the guardian thing isen't holding the spear, so much as floating it behind his hand... I would suggest to fix this making the spear shaft thicker.

Title: Re: chubby predator
Post by: and2 on April 09, 2007, 01:37:42 am

ohh i see. yes, thank you.
I will try fix a bit later on.

Thanks for the fast reply also.

Title: Re: chubby predator
Post by: Malor on April 09, 2007, 01:40:44 am

Quote from: and2 on April 09, 2007, 01:37:42 am

ohh i see. yes, thank you.
I will try fix a bit later on.

Thanks for the fast reply also.

yep, no problem, I have othing better to do tonight, and I am incredibly bored, so I stalking the boards for new posts :crazy:

Title: Re: Pixel's that need cc
Post by: and2 on April 16, 2007, 12:58:11 am

started a bunny? a Dead bunny.
Going for something small with detail

Zombie Bunny.
(http://img265.imageshack.us/img265/8968/mehht2.png)
-unsure of how to do legs
-unsure if readable
-trouble with making heart look like its hanging out of the hole in the bunny's chest

Title: Re: Pixel's that need cc
Post by: Mixel on April 16, 2007, 01:17:06 am

It definitely looks like a zombie bunny to me, I love it..

The eyes look very pinky rather than reddish here, but it could be the colours surrounding it offsetting them.. they look kind of swollen pustule-ish.. (is that bad for a zombie bunny eyes? possibly not)

I'm not sure i understand the angle at the bottom of it's body? Would the legs be like little teddy-bear type things? It looks a bit plushy-like now and that could be cute.

Title: Re: Pixel's that need cc
Post by: and2 on April 16, 2007, 01:26:23 am

yeh, thats the kinda idea. small, cute, DEAD! lol.
i am going for a not so realistic look, yet not 100% cartoon-like, kinda like a doll. Perhaps the bunny version of chucky?  ;)

Title: Re: Pixel's that need cc
Post by: and2 on April 16, 2007, 10:10:28 am

Update:
(http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/562/rwablp5.png)

Okay, i wrecked it.  :'(

Title: Re: Pixel's that need cc
Post by: Fool on April 16, 2007, 11:02:36 am

For a legs maybe something like that?

(http://www.foolstown.com/misc/rab.gif)

Title: Re: Pixel's that need cc
Post by: and2 on April 17, 2007, 08:21:41 am

woah, thats a very helpful edit fool thanks a bunch.
hows this?
(http://img185.imageshack.us/img185/5318/dropitnn5.png)

Further crits are very welcome.
also sugestions for what else to add?
and maybe some ideas for some funny text?

I was thinking of putting in a little girl handing the bunny a rose.  :lol:

baha!!
(http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/7926/dropit6fl9.png)