Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Dnilb on September 14, 2019, 08:38:06 am

Title: [WIP][CC]Guido Mista
Post by: Dnilb on September 14, 2019, 08:38:06 am
(https://i.imgur.com/PnLLRZv.png)
Not so happy about end result, I could use some feedback.
So far I think pants might be too wide in comparison to rest of the body and contrast between belly skin->red part of shirt looks weird.
Also his shirt white strips were nightmare to transfer to pixel art, but I think it doesn't look that terrible as it did when I first started.
refrence https://imgur.com/jDx5AGd
Title: Re: [WIP][CC]Guido Mista
Post by: Schwee on September 15, 2019, 05:30:52 am
I can't really speak to how it looks compared to whatever reference you are using but I would say its a good sprite overall.  A few critiques I can give:

* The black on the left side of the characters face seems odd.  I am not sure if that is supposed to be shadow or some partial mask.  In fact, I would say the black outline is a bit misused in general.  It fits in some areas like the darkest areas of the legs, but it looks out of place as a partial outline in the hair and hands.
* You may be trying to cram too much detail into the hair with the red and white.
* If this is a front view pose, then the bottom left foot of the character shouldn't be at an angle, unless he is standing on the balls of his feet but in that case you could make some minor improvements to help that read stronger.