Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Souly on March 21, 2007, 08:37:55 pm

Title: Shit sons. (Last piece for a while)
Post by: Souly on March 21, 2007, 08:37:55 pm

Since I'm being evicted on Friday I thought I'd make one last piece before I go on the road.

(http://imagehost.ensellitis.com/imagesv2/6652225044shitsonscolor.gif) -> (http://imagehost.ensellitis.com/imagesv2/2033605831shitsonscolor.gif) -> (http://imagehost.ensellitis.com/imagesv2/6586034291shitsonscolor.gif)

Recent:
(http://imagehost.ensellitis.com/imagesv2/8957927662shitsonscolor.gif)

Title: Re: Shit sons.
Post by: flaber on March 21, 2007, 09:41:47 pm

your not gone for good are you?

Title: Re: Shit sons.
Post by: fil_razorback on March 21, 2007, 11:02:14 pm

eek ? Please tell us it's just a story behing the piece, not truth >.<

Title: Re: Shit sons.
Post by: Souly on March 22, 2007, 05:24:24 am

I have until Friday to find a place to live.
The manager of my building told my father that I have to leave by Friday or else he's evicted on Monday, that means he too will have no place to live.

I have to do this for my father, he's gone through enough already.
I'm not getting him evicted for the dumb shit I do.

Title: Re: Shit sons.
Post by: fil_razorback on March 22, 2007, 07:43:02 am

Oh crap  :'(
We'll miss you and I hope things can get better for you soon :/

Title: Re: Shit sons.
Post by: Souly on March 22, 2007, 08:27:21 pm

Any suggestions as to what I should do with this piece?

Title: Re: Shit sons.
Post by: The B.O.B. on March 22, 2007, 08:53:24 pm

Quote from: Souly on March 21, 2007, 08:37:55 pm

Since I'm being evicted on Friday I thought I'd make one last piece before I go on the road.

(http://imagehost.ensellitis.com/imagesv2/6652225044shitsonscolor.gif) -> (http://imagehost.ensellitis.com/imagesv2/2033605831shitsonscolor.gif) -> (http://imagehost.ensellitis.com/imagesv2/6586034291shitsonscolor.gif)

I feel like a broken record, but the issue is the same as your previous pieces: There is too much noise. The first wip is a great start, but as it moves along, it seems like you sorta' muddled the skin tones into the white(bones) of his jacket/hoody. Also, frequently seeing the noise issue from pieces of the past makes it hard for me to determine the texture of the pants you were originally going for. As in, is it: denim, snake skin, fishnets?!!? I really like the character though. Also, his fingers, in the latest wip, seem strange. I think you tried to pack too much detail in a small space, when it wasn't necessary. Also, this may be personal preference, but I think you should move the bag(homeless suitcase) a little further too the right end of the stick. Other wise, I really dig the character design, and the mohawk is killer. Now finish it, young Padawan!

(if my words are too goofy to understand, just ask and I'll try to make an edit to better explain myself...)

Title: Re: Shit sons.
Post by: Souly on March 22, 2007, 09:16:36 pm

(http://imagehost.ensellitis.com/imagesv2/8957927662shitsonscolor.gif)

I know.. I tried to fix that with this one.
But it seems I starting doing the noise thing.

Hopefully that looks better.
I decided to get rid of the random purple in the pants.
Their just denim. :P

Also, the mohawk is precisely my new hair cut.  ;D

Title: Re: Shit sons.
Post by: terminal_arcade on March 22, 2007, 09:59:55 pm

Lookin' pretty good, very unified, though I would go with the hand in the 2nd version. It's more wrapping around the stick, and it'd solve the muddled-complexity issues BOB brought up.

Title: Re: Shit sons.
Post by: Souly on March 23, 2007, 03:42:13 am

I've got until tonight to finish it.
So when I get home I'll work on it some more, and then it will be finished.