Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Crazy Asian Gamer on March 18, 2007, 07:36:02 am

Title: Wishing I joined Pixelator earlier...
Post by: Crazy Asian Gamer on March 18, 2007, 07:36:02 am
(http://www.pixeljoint.com/files/icons/full/nightsky.gif)
Iunno. I liked the challenge, so I did something. 14 col.

Now that I made it, I notice that I could have added lighting effects where the lightning meets the cloud...
Title: Re: Wishing I joined Pixelator earlier...
Post by: Silver on March 18, 2007, 08:08:53 am
I can't stop staring at the moon. Really nice colors  :y:
Title: Re: Wishing I joined Pixelator earlier...
Post by: Skull on March 18, 2007, 10:15:21 am
I can't stop staring at the moon. Really nice colors  :y:

Indeed. That's wonderfully done.
Title: Re: Wishing I joined Pixelator earlier...
Post by: kakikukeko on March 18, 2007, 11:33:02 am
Indeed, the moon by itself is very well done.. As part of the picture, I wonder if it doesn't have too much contrast though..
It's only after reading your comment CAG that I saw the "cloud".. For me it looked more like a bloby solid stuff than a vaporous gazeous thing...
I think it's because of the shading... it looks like it got some specular/shining on it (with the blue reflection of the moon ) and shouldn't have imho.
the lightnings could have more "branches" too maybe?
the BG looks good to me (i'm no pro though) ,stars AA etc..  :y:
Title: Re: Wishing I joined Pixelator earlier...
Post by: Stwelin on March 18, 2007, 01:28:43 pm
Instead of the moon being too contrasting, and punishing it for standing out, bring the clouds to its level here... Right now they look like... well, rocks. I'd try to make the inndividual little spheres less individual, dither them into each other, and then ultimately dither them into the sky more, so they have that fluffly flowy feel to them, rather than solid.
Title: Re: Wishing I joined Pixelator earlier...
Post by: Crazy Asian Gamer on March 18, 2007, 04:22:17 pm
(http://www.pixeljoint.com/files/icons/full/nightsky2.gif)
So I made an edit.

Yeah, I wasn't so happy about the cloud too, so I was trying to get to (GAH!) look right. :lol:
Thanks for the C&C as of so far. :y:
Title: Re: Wishing I joined Pixelator earlier...
Post by: Syn on March 18, 2007, 04:49:40 pm
Hey CAG, sup, been a while.

The edit looks good, but I thing you could still make the radius of light emanating from the lightning bigger.
Title: Re: Wishing I joined Pixelator earlier...
Post by: Crazy Asian Gamer on March 18, 2007, 06:51:48 pm
Hey Syn, wassup!  ;D

(http://www.pixeljoint.com/files/icons/full/nightsky3.gif)

lol, ANOTHER edit. I tried making the lightning lighting radius larger, but I didn't like the way that turned out. I did push the moon back some, though. It's starting to grow on me :D
Title: Re: Wishing I joined Pixelator earlier...
Post by: rougewisp on March 18, 2007, 09:14:40 pm
I'm digging the hatching on the clouds... Mixed feelings about the red though.
Title: Re: Wishing I joined Pixelator earlier...
Post by: Andy Tran on March 21, 2007, 07:35:02 am
 That's tight, man. I liked how the brown clouds are dithered. The star effects there were pretty cool.