Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: madartiststan on March 14, 2007, 08:57:46 pm

Title: [WIP] New Shirt
Post by: madartiststan on March 14, 2007, 08:57:46 pm

This is my second shirt. After all the opinions on the first one I wanted to change it quite some bit and I've been working hard on it. Except I hate my highlights  :'(!

C+C Is very much welcome as I have major issues with the way it's looking.

Oldest:
(http://i92.photobucket.com/albums/l3/thekidstan/Pixel%20Art/mythicshirtoutline.png)


Older:
(http://i92.photobucket.com/albums/l3/thekidstan/Pixel%20Art/mythicshirtoutline-1.png)

Ah, I know see what you mean. I took a bit of time to bump up the contrast and saw how extremely odd the wrinkles and folds looked. Thanks. I think it's looking better already.


Newest:
(http://i92.photobucket.com/albums/l3/thekidstan/Pixel%20Art/mythicshirtoutline-2.png)

The sleeves are bothering me a bit but I think it's looking good.  ;D


Also, thanks Adam for the kind words. :D

Title: Re: [WIP] New Shirt
Post by: alkaline on March 14, 2007, 09:01:55 pm

up the contrast first man!

your folds are looking a little unrealistic but it was probably hard to see it because your contrast was so low.

Title: Re: [WIP] New Shirt
Post by: AdamAtomic on March 14, 2007, 09:32:12 pm

MASSIVE IMPROVEMENT!  Could definitely use some more contrast, but this is like...600x better than your first one.  Keep at it!

Title: Re: [WIP] New Shirt
Post by: madartiststan on March 14, 2007, 10:40:46 pm

(http://i92.photobucket.com/albums/l3/thekidstan/mythicshirtoutline.gif)

I was wondering what you'd all deem more appropriate. The grayscale or the purple?  ??? I think the purple looks better myself.

Title: Re: [WIP] New Shirt
Post by: Serena on March 14, 2007, 10:47:29 pm

If you're going to do the purple, I'd take the saturation way down... ouch >_-