Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Evil-Ville on March 12, 2007, 11:51:16 pm

Title: Mörkö (Updated 16/3/07)
Post by: Evil-Ville on March 12, 2007, 11:51:16 pm
I've been working on this for a week or two now, very little at a time though. I am very happy with it so far.

(http://img83.imageshack.us/img83/2452/mrk2ce4.png)

Stuff that I know needs fixing:
-Make head rounder
-Work on the teeth more
-Break up the dither patterns with some styledither

Thanks to Ptoing for some good crits so far.

Update: I haven't really worked that much but decided to give an update anyways. Only change (I think) is that I've now started texturing the right side of the face.
Title: Re: Mörkö
Post by: eck on March 13, 2007, 12:51:01 am
if your going to be using it at 2x, you should probably aa the dude into the white floor. 

other than that, this is prety sweet =P  cant stop staring at that awasome texture on the nose, and the shadow on the eyes, even before its finsihed
Title: Re: Mörkö
Post by: Souly on March 13, 2007, 01:17:47 am
Holy fuck.

It's so beautiful.  :'(
Title: Re: Mörkö
Post by: AdamAtomic on March 13, 2007, 01:19:08 am
Yeah that's totally sweet, finish it so I can save it off for reference!!
Title: Re: Mörkö
Post by: DJ gman on March 13, 2007, 01:19:29 am
It's ugly in a beautiful way

nice work (^_^)b
Title: Re: Mörkö
Post by: Larwick on March 13, 2007, 01:25:31 am
There is something about this that's just so... er.. delicious? Keep it up, i aint got no crits, just thought i'd join everyone with the praise  :y:
Title: Re: Mörkö
Post by: The B.O.B. on March 13, 2007, 01:28:33 am
   The Tower in the background looks out of place for some reason. It's as if the colors are too "close" to be considered to be behind the white character. Also, I think you should smooth things out with the shape of the giant monsters face, as certain parts of it's head are looking chunky, and unrefined. I'd also consider making his head a wee bit more round. I'm not too hot about the dithered background either. Looks, weird to me, I don't know.
   As for everything else, I'm gettin' some Mahogany in the pants. Looks fantastic, and the texture is wonderful. Do finish this, please. Or else...


***edit***

just read the rest of your description, and the part about you wanting to make it rounder, thus making my critique redundant...

Oh and Xion:

Do finish this, please. Or else...
Due?

Well, anyway, this looks awesome.
What specs are this be? Vert pixels...what has vert pixels?

I don't know what you are talking about, good sir :P...[/i]
Title: Re: Mörkö
Post by: Fool on March 13, 2007, 02:18:50 am
Beautiful texture=) Can't wait to see it finished, so I could still it.=))
Title: Re: Mörkö
Post by: Xion on March 13, 2007, 02:43:30 am
Due finish this, please. Or else...
Due?

Well, anyway, this looks awesome.
What specs are this be? Vert pixels...what has vert pixels?
Title: Re: Mörkö
Post by: ptoing on March 13, 2007, 02:46:07 am
The amiga had a vertical pixel mode, as well as CGA on the PC. I think the 2 colour mode on the CPC is vert as well.
Title: Re: Mörkö
Post by: Gunne on March 13, 2007, 10:31:23 pm
hehe, this is some funky stuff. I really like it, only sad thing is that I don't have any crits for you sorry :yell: