Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Grynz on February 26, 2007, 01:10:01 am

Title: [WIP] Horus, The God of Sky
Post by: Grynz on February 26, 2007, 01:10:01 am

(http://img81.imageshack.us/img81/2808/wipvc5.png)


Early WIP. Need C+C on anatomy, and some ideas to make the piece more impressive.

Title: Re: [WIP] Horus, The God of Sky
Post by: That One Guy on February 26, 2007, 04:57:49 am

Hey there, Grynz. Right now, just a glaring imperfection in this piece is the fact that he has 4 abs. I like it otherwise, but I'm not into the whole anatomy thing.

Title: Re: [WIP] Horus, The God of Sky
Post by: Wakka on February 26, 2007, 05:36:50 am

We need more to actually critique. However, please do fix the abs. And I like his hand/fingers. Very nice.  :y:

Title: Re: [WIP] Horus, The God of Sky
Post by: Colonel Mustard on February 26, 2007, 06:32:58 am

Horus is normally illustrated as a man with a falcons head, so what I'd suggest you do first is change the lineart to reflect that.
Like this perhaps: http://www.hieroglyphen-info.de/bilder/goetter/horus.jpg

I'm more of a fan of the stargate designs of Horus though, http://screenshots.filesnetwork.com/69/files2/40436_1.jpg is a more developed one.