Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: madartiststan on February 14, 2007, 02:16:59 am

Title: [WIP]Woodland Sprite
Post by: madartiststan on February 14, 2007, 02:16:59 am

Need some c+c not sure what I could fix but it feels like something's wrong or something I'm forgetting.  :'(

(http://i92.photobucket.com/albums/l3/thekidstan/forestwoodlite.png)

Title: Re: [WIP]Woodland Sprite
Post by: Atrophy on February 14, 2007, 02:19:33 am

I'm not exactly sure.. what to crit since its mainly just a green blob with a darker shade of lines on its chest.

Edit: Now that I took a closer look you might want to increase the contrast between the greens.

Title: Re: [WIP]Woodland Sprite
Post by: Fizz on February 14, 2007, 04:46:34 am

(http://two.xthost.info/Fizzi/edits/forestwoodlite.png)

Contrast added.  Don't set all your colors to maximum saturation.  Yes, it brings out the greenest of greens, but destroys the constrast.  Make use of your extra highlight too.

Title: Re: [WIP]Woodland Sprite
Post by: I Am Uh on February 14, 2007, 03:31:48 pm

Edit:
(http://img440.imageshack.us/img440/6696/newbitmapimage2hb5.png)
I don't know if this helps much but you can take a look at it.

Title: Re: [WIP]Woodland Sprite
Post by: madartiststan on February 14, 2007, 05:12:46 pm

Yes these examples help very much so. Thanks. :]