Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: madartiststan on February 11, 2007, 05:39:55 am
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His name is Bob. He is my elephant. I posted early while doing the lineart hoping I could get some crits if there's anything wrong with the lineart. Animation coming soon. C+C Please. :D
(http://img20.imageshack.us/img20/7016/krelephantefo7.png)
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That's a lot of invisible space. Please crop it.
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Cropped. And tried some shading...I'm just so terrible with it and have no clue about or how to start shading. Anyone have some pointers?
(http://img131.imageshack.us/img131/981/krelephanteeu4.png)
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Your palette needs much more contrast and should not have a saturation 0.
Elephants are not pure grey ^^
Also, you should pick a lightsource before you start shading ^^
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That's the thing I have no clue about shading. :[
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picture that it is 3d then think where would the light be and where it wouldnt. then shade lighter colours where light will be and so on.
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The front legs look wrong, you should move his front legs a little to the right, and his front leg that's most behind the elephant should be placed a little behind his other front leg
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The front legs look wrong, you should move his front legs a little to the left, and his front leg that's most behind the elephant should be placed a little behind his other front leg
I hope you mean to the right. The legs are already too far left.
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Whoops, yeah I meant to the right ;)