Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Opacus on February 07, 2007, 07:16:44 pm
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Yes, you have probably seen it:
(http://img299.imageshack.us/img299/633/thebeast3colourwhitelingh0.gif)
Since Helm, Snader and Ryumaru were all positively surpised by my entry, I think it will be a good experience to push it further.
I might make it somewhat bigger, add a back ground, add bigger legs for certain, and some more detail. All other pixel art
I'm working on currently will be on-hold till I get this done, since I think this could give me experience I do not want to miss out on.
Any comment is apreciated.
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Legs fixed?
(http://img172.imageshack.us/img172/8883/thebeast3colourwhitelinds3.gif)
(Well, not completely fixed yet, need help on those ugly feet.)
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You have some lightning issues and it needs more contrast.
Here's an edit:
(http://img172.imageshack.us/img172/8883/thebeast3colourwhitelinds3.gif)->(http://img48.imageshack.us/img48/9895/opacuspr5.gif)
The palette is good but you need to put it into better use at some places.
I've noticed that you tend to break lines although your palette has a nice transition colour for those cases.
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I think for the tail to look more correct, it should be placed a little farther to the left and downwards. Also, maybe some more shading at the base would help it fall into the background more, since the piece uses such a perspective.
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Let him be the original colour and add some muscles.
It will look freakishly awesome.
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The legs look like he's trying to do a split. Here's a suggestion for the legs:
(http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j135/mr_norris/legs.gif)
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I loved your entry :) I like Luzeke's edit on the legs.