Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: MoyArt on February 06, 2007, 10:37:51 pm
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Hi, ima a huge Gremlins Fan and i think that there is not enough pixel gremlins on the web so i decided to start a gremlin revolution, starting with Stripe.
Ive just finished Stripe head, and i would love to hear your comments ;D
Greetings!!!!!!
(http://i121.photobucket.com/albums/o214/MoyArt/rallita.png)
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Well I tried to clean it up a bit. Quick n dirty patch up. (Note I only redid some of the left side)
(The ear I know your going for like an army camo effect) I would suggest bending it more etc.
Original PaintOver Animation Diff
(http://i172.photobucket.com/albums/w11/SCiDT/Original.png)(http://i172.photobucket.com/albums/w11/SCiDT/Stripe.png)(http://i172.photobucket.com/albums/w11/SCiDT/POStripe.gif)
My main focus on the brow / eye area was trying to eliminate your thick dark lines, with the "sell out" technique (I think thats what its called). Also getting the eye to look more devilish :mean: and defined.
With the hair i think less is more, just messed it up (hair styling) ;) and then left it with as little as possible shadow.
The ear I just shadowed more plainly.
The colors ( I am not good at those at all) I think are to close to each other in color meaning they look way too similar, try and vary them further apart. :) This you need someone else to help you with. I am trying to understand color myself.
I hope this helps maybe gives you some more ideas.
Regards,
SCiDT
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Dude Thanks a lot!! it looks pretty neat, im gonna try to clean myself like the way you did, i really like the way his left eye looks right now.
Best regards
MoyArt
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Its a pleasure, I am also still learning :D
Anytime I can help I'll try, I understand the frustration when you've worked a piece for hours and just cant get it the way you want it :'(
Good luck!
Regards,
SCiDT
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im looking at this from my ds and under this resolution the neck looks like male genatalia, sorry to bring this up i know its a little juvenile but i think you should change it especialy now that i brought it up so everyone will see it :p
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im looking at this from my ds and under this resolution the neck looks like male genatalia, sorry to bring this up i know its a little juvenile but i think you should change it especialy now that i brought it up so everyone will see it :p
Done!! ;D
(http://i143.photobucket.com/albums/r147/borgshi/rallita2.png)
Also i cleaned just a little bit, and made some changes, what do you think??
Thanks a lot for your help, now im making the body
Regards
MoyArt
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Looking better.
I wish you luck with the body!
PS: Love the hair. :D