Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: falcon on January 16, 2007, 10:06:12 am

Title: corpse!!
Post by: falcon on January 16, 2007, 10:06:12 am

hello,everybody ;D

i'm new here.this is my new pixel.it's not complete.but i haven't mood done it.  :huh:

i will make a corpse,so the color is dark.

hope you like it,hoho.

(http://www.cgfalcon.com/sobi1.gif)

Title: Re: corpse!!
Post by: Luzeke on January 16, 2007, 10:25:40 am

Hello & welcome.

I like it, the blueish skin looks cool. Like your style. Though his left hand needs a bit of work. The way his arm is would make the hand show more knuckles and less fingers. Especially in the pinky area.
And the dithered shadow doesn't fit but that's just personal preference. A solid shadow would look better imo.

Cool work.

Title: Re: corpse!!
Post by: Helm on January 16, 2007, 10:46:27 pm

Where is the lightsource?

Title: Re: corpse!!
Post by: gliding on January 16, 2007, 11:49:38 pm

Seems to me that you intended the ligh source to be our left so I did a small edit to show you a few things I might have changed. Great work on the design.


(http://i13.tinypic.com/2aiea76.jpg)

Title: Re: corpse!!
Post by: Stwelin on January 17, 2007, 03:23:25 am

please tell me you did not .jpg that.

Aaaanyway, the foot on the right (his left, i guess?) looks a bit weirdly bent or shaped. I'd bring down the knee just a tad and have the leg go a bit farther back, as well as thinning the ankle and making the foot less blocky. Maybe making the foot face the camera/viewer a bit more would suit it.

Title: Re: corpse!!
Post by: Andy Tran on January 17, 2007, 03:26:17 am

 Not bad, I think a red eye could do him good for evil. Good luck! 

Title: Re: corpse!!
Post by: falcon on January 17, 2007, 08:50:58 am

thx for everyone advice ! :)

the lightsource to be our left and front.