Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Scotteh on January 07, 2007, 04:05:46 pm

Title: Mockup
Post by: Scotteh on January 07, 2007, 04:05:46 pm

Totally bored :( So I made this from ToTaL bOrEdOm :D
(http://img154.imageshack.us/img154/1676/mockupvy3.png)

Kill it with Critiques Please :)

Title: Re: Mockup
Post by: Delgneith on January 07, 2007, 04:20:54 pm

• The highlights on the character's shirt look totally random and aren't doing much for the piece.
• The outline of the character seems too light against the background. I suggest maybe trying without an outline at all.
• If those are supposed to be coins they don't look very coin like. Try looking at some references of coins.
• The face seems to have 2 buffer/AA shades but the rest of the body has none. This makes the style look a bit inconsistent.
• The background and platforms confuses me. What is it supposed to be? Also why the double pixel highlights on the platform?

Other than that I think it looks like you got a pretty decent start. Something about the interface doesn't work for me. Maybe you could spruce it up.

Title: Re: Mockup
Post by: Ryona on January 07, 2007, 04:32:02 pm

Delgneith pointed out pretty much everything, so I just wanted to drop in and say that your mockup is cute.  :)

Title: Re: Mockup
Post by: Scotteh on January 07, 2007, 04:55:38 pm

@Delgneith: I will try improve everything you pointed out :)

@Ryona:  :-*