Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Dan on September 26, 2005, 06:51:03 pm

Title: Demonic Bunny (WIP Line art)
Post by: Dan on September 26, 2005, 06:51:03 pm

This is my W.I.P Rabbit what you think? Got any ideas or critique before i colour it?
(http://www.slickhead.co.uk/rabbit.gif)

I am not going to lie and say i made all of this because that would be... lying. I would call this piece a collaboration. I did the line art then pep coloured it, then i fiddled around with it to make it suit my needs and added my name. ;) Thanks Pep!

(http://www.slickhead.co.uk/bunnie2.gif)

Any more critique wont go a miss!

Thank you,

Dan

Title: Re: Demonic Bunny (WIP Line art)
Post by: Fredde on September 26, 2005, 07:27:56 pm

It looks good and it looks like the bunny from Donnie Darko.

Title: Re: Demonic Bunny (WIP Line art)
Post by: LuciferianSoul on September 27, 2005, 01:01:36 am

A few things - the left ear. Is looking wonky, you may have to fiddle with it. It goes skinny before the fold, this doesn't look very good.
Also, the arms - the upper arms are pudgy and seem to squish his bunny-boobies in as if they have some cleavage.

Other than that, it's cute, yet devilish. ;D
Can't wait to see the colouring!

Title: Re: Demonic Bunny (WIP Line art)
Post by: lief on September 27, 2005, 10:20:35 pm

i think thats my only issue... do demonic bunnies have boobies?  maybe seperate the ears off the skull with a line.

Title: Re: Demonic Bunny (WIP Line art)
Post by: Dan on September 28, 2005, 03:23:14 pm

Haha! It's like the weird phanomanom of the crazy frogs genitals. Yes i think i will be removing the bunny's breast but on the other hand they might add a bit more character. Thanks for all the comments guys ;)

Thank you,

Dan