Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: DevilDRake on January 04, 2007, 12:22:02 pm

Title: First pixel
Post by: DevilDRake on January 04, 2007, 12:22:02 pm

Hey all, im new here, more of you people can get to know me as Kyle

this is my first pixel that ive done linework for aswell

(http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i124/kyle_owns_you/Firstlineartcolour3-rsmcopy.png)

i usually colour things.. im really bad at lineart, so if anyone can give me tips it would be appreciated.

Also people give me CC please. as i need to know what to change.

Title: Re: First pixel
Post by: and2 on January 05, 2007, 04:50:41 am

thats a pretty good for first, and the only way to get better is practice. Practice, practice, practice..

Title: Re: First pixel
Post by: DevilDRake on January 05, 2007, 04:51:47 am

You did the border on the 1 on my avvy.. i would of posted that but its not fully my work this is :P :P

Title: Re: First pixel
Post by: Akzidenz on January 05, 2007, 05:03:59 am

It's over-dithered at the moment. Generally, the less dithered a "metal" surface is, the easier it is to make it shiny. Also, you're shading the helmet, but not the little bumps and spikes on it. Do the whole thing. And the inside of the helmet is lit inexplicably - if you only have one light source, and it's coming from top left, that interior should be dark.

Also, this is generally not cool:

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free bump for ya, please be sure to go to my topic.

Try not to "bump" threads here unless you have something to contribute to them. If people want to post, they'll post. But definitely don't bump someone else's thread, just to direct them to your own, when it's been dead for a week.

Good luck with the helmet, keep posting progress here.

Title: Re: First pixel
Post by: DevilDRake on January 05, 2007, 11:58:46 am

alright ill be sure not to do it again, also thanks for the cc,