Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: pengu2 on November 25, 2018, 05:58:59 pm
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So i made this running animation and since I'm not an artist I was wondering if someone here could point out some things I could improve with my animation?
(https://i.imgur.com/CRgey9Y.gif)
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Your image embed doesn't work. Dropbox isn't nice about hotlinking, I recommend using a dedicated image host such as imgur instead.
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Your image embed doesn't work. Dropbox isn't nice about hotlinking, I recommend using a dedicated image host such as imgur instead.
Oh, okey i think it's fixed now
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The character is moving very slowly, which doesn't match the large movement of their hat. I think the animation should either play faster, or have fewer frames.
I am having trouble following the character's legs. How many steps are there per animation loop? It seems like the front leg cycles twice for every cycle of the back leg.
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The character is moving very slowly, which doesn't match the large movement of their hat. I think the animation should either play faster, or have fewer frames.
I am having trouble following the character's legs. How many steps are there per animation loop? It seems like the front leg cycles twice for every cycle of the back leg.
I sped up the animation by 25% and colored one leg in a darker color so its easier to track. I also made the hat more fluid
But the legs feel very static and i don't know what to do about it really without scaling up the animation
(https://i.imgur.com/tdol6RF.gif)
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When the right leg goes forward the right arm should go backwards.
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When the right leg goes forward the right arm should go backwards.
Oh, forgot about that
(https://i.imgur.com/y7RZuF0.gif)
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try dropping two frames during the middle so the legs spend less time there